This is generally good, but your regular misspelling of Malcolm X and your notion that he founded the Nation of Islam says you really need to learn more about him and his path from identitarianism to universalism. Forgive me for pimping my own piece on the subject: https://medium.com/a-universalist-in-an-identitarian-age/identitarians-love-malcolm-x-before-mecca-universalists-love-him-after-8ebbc80b1f5d